Tuesday, March 9, 2010

The Old Man and the Sea: Obstacles

People are constantly running into obstacles, whether it’s everyday life, or even a special occasion. There are disadvantages to almost everything we do, and sometimes we just need to face them. People must make decisions, and sometimes they are horrific mistakes. Something like getting into an accident because you were texting while driving could have been easily avoided. Santiago ran into a number of challenging obstacles while out at sea, firstly, he was alone, also the lack of advanced technology, and the size and strength of the Marlin. Santiago wasn’t prepared to be out at sea for as long as he was, and he was very resentful of this. The old man faced things that he couldn’t handle, and he paid for it in the end.

Sometimes people can’t handle things on their own.This is one of those cases because Santiago was alone for several days on the skiff by himself, with no crew or help. He obviously needed Manolin’s assistance because it was nearly impossible to catch a fish the size of the Marlin all alone. The old man was very wise, and he managed catch the fish anyway, but “’if the boy were [there] he would wet the coils of the line, he thought’” (83). If the boy were on the boat with Santiago and assisting him, then catching the Marlin would’ve been much easier and faster.

Manolin could’ve assisted Santiago on the skiff, but instead the old man is regretful that he didn’t come along. The old man thought about the boy, and talked about him and how much easier it would’ve been with his help. “Aloud he said, ‘I wish I had the boy’” (51). Any type of crew or help would’ve been helpful to the old man, but in the end it was just an obstacle.

Even the simplest technologies help people when they have no attendants. Something as little as a walkie-talkie could save a life or influence a decision. In Santiago’s case, the most helpful piece of technology would’ve been a radio. If he had a radio, he could have let others know his lonely and haunting situation. “And the rich have radios to talk to them in their boats and to bring them the baseball.’” (39). He would have brought many other tools with him, but the most important would be a radio so he could be entertained by sports and, more importantly, contact others to get the aid he needs.

The Marlin was massive, and very strong. The old man was astonished by its strength and size, since he has never seen anything like it. “’No,’ he said. “He can’t be that big’” (90). But the Marlin was about eighteen feet long, and fifteen hundred pounds. It had threatening strength, and its every move was suspenseful. It was a very tense situation, and there was no way out.

The old man stayed very controlled yet anxious throughout the entire book, his every move had to be precise. People face obstacles that are stronger than them, such as bully or boss. Santiago struggled to catch the fish, but he had patience and beat the odds of the Marlin’s immaculate size. Not everyone believed what they saw when the skiff was in the water and the old man was back. “Many fishermen were around the skiff looking at what was lashed beside it and one was in the water, his trousers rolled up, measuring the skeleton with a length of line” (122). The Marlin was an incredible miracle, and the old man had proof of his existence.

The sincere old man had to make unexpected decisions, and some seriously affected his life. If he caught the Marlin and was able to bring it home safely, then he would have enough food to go on the table and money to go around. But he faced obstacles such as the size and strength of the Marlin, being alone, and the lack of technology. His unprepared ness caused him to lose a life-changing Marlin, and he was remorseful due to his obstacles. But obstacles are everywhere, and people just have to try to find the best way through them.

10 comments:

  1. 1. Her thesis was the obstacles the the old man faced throughout the story. She made it clear by explaining it and stating it several times throughout the essay. It engaged me with the real life situations were people come in contact with obstacles.
    2. The quote that I felt the strongest was, “’No,’ he said. “He can’t be that big’” (90)This is because it showed Santaigo's actual suprise when he saw the marlin out of the water. It also fits well into Jenna's topic of the Marlin being extremely powerful and large in size.
    3. The strongest point in this essay I feel would be its good description and use of vocabulary. She descirbed how each obstacle affected the old man's situation. She also used vocabulary to her advantage throughout her essay.
    4. The weakest point in Jenna's essay I feel is sometimes the topics seemed to wander from the original point. Also sometimes the vocabulary did not seem to fit into the sentence.

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  2. 1. This essay's thesis is that the old man had to face hardships like being alone, lack of technology, and the strength and size of the marlin. It was clear and concise. It intrigued me because the opening paragraph was written very well, so it made me keep reading.
    2. The quote that was the best was..“’if the boy were [there] he would wet the coils of the line, he thought’” (83). It was good because it was incorporated into your sentence which i thought was very unique and creative.
    3.The author's quote choice was very good and her word choice of the analysis thing was great. it made the essay seem more intersting and the quotes backed up her reasons well.
    4. I think the weak part of the essay is the paragraph about the lack of technology. It dosent seem very strong to me like your other ones. Maybe you should maybe give more examples or add something..otherwise its very good!

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  3. 1. The thesis was that the old man faced what he couldn't handle and he paid for it in the end. The thesis was well explained and it stressed the importance of obstacles. The obstacles that the old man faced were also introduced which was helpful for explaining what the essay is about.
    2. The quote about the marlin's size was very well incorporated. It shows his reaction when he realized what his obstacle was. It flows with the paragraph and the rest of the paragraph explains in well.
    3. The author has a lot of good word choices in this essay. Jenna adds in the literary words well and they flow with the essay. I really liked "The old man faced things that he couldn’t handle, and he paid for it in the end." I like it because it stresses the importance of all of the obstacles in Santiago's path.
    4. One weakness in this essay is the first body paragraph, it's very good (like the rest of the essay) but out of all the paragraphs it has the least evidence. You might want to add a little more about how the boy could have helped him.

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  4. 1. The thesis was that Santiago had to deal with many obstacles that he couldn’t handle. He was alone, didn’t have advanced technology, and had to deal with the size of the marlin. It was fairly clear and engaging.
    2. The explanation of the marlin's strength was the best and well-written. The vocabulary and word choice was well-incorporated
    3. I think the word choice was well done. "The Marlin was a rare find, but it also had rare strength. Santiago struggled to catch him, but he had patience and beat the odds of the Marlin’s immaculate size."
    4. This essay was kind of choppy at times. Also, it can seem like too much of a summary sometimes. But it was well done and a really good essay.

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  5. 1) Her theisis is totally clear, and to the point. It talks about how there is concequences to everything we do.

    2) I really like the first quote that Jenna used because it uses great examples, and I think that it fits nicely within the paragraph. It is also well explained, and it makes everything else seem more detailed.

    3) Jenna's whole essay is really organized and written well. I think that the choice of adjectives that she used are great too.

    4) I think that the essay could use a bit more analyisis, and a bit less plot summary. But on the other side she gives great points that I would not have even considered. Like the points about the radios, those were really good, and I haven't seen anything like it before. Good Job!

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  6. The essay’s thesis was that even though not everyone has everything they would need to face a obstacle with them or available, they would figure out a different way to figure out the situation. Jenna’s essay does engage me. It didn’t leave me bored and the information wasn’t repeated to often. The emphasis quote and how the old man wish he had Manolin. It made it stand out because Santiago is an old man who needs younger, stronger people to work with. The one thing this essay does extremely well is the word choice. She uses many understanding words that make the story seem bigger than itself. This is one example of excellent word choice, “Santiago ran into a number of challenging obstacles while out at sea, firstly, he was alone, also the lack of advanced technology, and the size and strength of the Marlin. Santiago wasn’t prepared to be out at sea for as long as he was, and he was very resentful of this. If he was prepared, then he might have been able to fight off the sharks, and bring the Marlin back safely.” I think the weakest aspect of the essay is the conclusion. I think the conclusion could have more detail or choice of better words. The conclusion could also of had been a little longer.

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  7. 1) the thesis os this essay is that the old man, santiago, has to face many difficult obstacles. the thesis is clear because it stressed the importance of it.

    2)i liked the quote about the size of the marlin. it showed santiago's surprise at ho big it was

    3) i really like the word choice and the essay was really well organized

    4) i thought it was really good except that you should add a little more analysis to it instead of having it mostly summary of the book

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  8. regretful, suspenseful, resentful, haunting, lonely, patient, wise, tense, precise, anxious, remorseful, sincere

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